A scholar named Wang,
laughed at my poems.
“The accents are wrong.” He said,
“Too many beats,
the meter is poor,
the wording impulsive.”
I laugh at his poems,
As he laughs at mine.
They read like:
the words of a blind man,
describing the sun.
~ Hoff (from Tao of Pooh)
Hmmm…
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Hehe! Thanks Mitzy I had fun reading that poem too. 💕
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